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A girl about 18 lied in an empty alley way located on the outskirts of an abandoned city. Her long golden hair was now red with blood and her clothes were ripped and torn and drenched in blood, her silvery blue eyes just stared into nothingness as images of how she ended up this way got into her head.

She was walknig alnog with some of her so called friends. They had walkedthrough this abandoned area before but something was different. Her friends weren't laughing at any of this girls jokes, as a matter of fact they seemed to be ignoring her. they were laughing and talknig to each other and would achknowledge the girl was with them but they wouldn't even talk to her.

When they had reached the outside of thealley way, one of the girls friends grabbed her and held her firmmly while 5 dark figures and the other friends attacked the girl with whips and knives. They threw her into the alley way after that and ran off and after a bit far off they seemed to forget about her.

The girl allowed tears to fall down her face freely as she felt unwanted in the world now. And with only 15 minutes left of going on with life, she was losing hope. Images of the people in her life appeared as she layed there.

The girls remembered her best friend who she had grown up with. The tow would do everything together, and the girl had even succedded in taking her friend to church and the two had been going to church together since. But then her friend had stopped talknig to her or even comming over to hang out. The only tiem the two even sa each other now was when the girl would pick up her friend for church.

The girl started to cry over that fact for she missed the good ol tiems where she could talk to her best friend about anything but now they hardly ever talked. And it was all cause of a friend from church. That friend took her best friend and started to hang out so much that finally  the best friend abbandoned the girl almost totally.

An image popped into her mind of her family and hwo many times she was rejected by her odler cousins. The cousins who SHE looked up to and considered her odler borthers and sisters had pushed her aside many times. And even forgot she was born in the same hospital that msot of them were born in as well.

The girl shut her eyes tightly and started sobbing hard. She could care a less the pain her sobs caused her, for it hurt her more about these facts.

Then an image of her boyfriend appeared, the man who seemed to want her arround. Who she had dumped twice and dated 3 times, and had promised her many times he would be there for her always. And had promised he would see her again in person since they were a long distance relationship...by at least an hour away from each other.

The girl felt wanted thinking her boyfriend wanted to see her and it wouldn't be lnog until she coudl see him again. She fought the pain she felt and tried her hardest to get up. She fought so much pain and more blood gushed out as she amde it to her hands and knees. But then her eyes grew wide.

She remembered hwo her boyfriend had broken his promise and was hardly even online for her anymore. And how he had been a jerk to her many times and even called her immature once. She grew weak and she fell to the ground once more. More hurt then what she was before. She felt her boyfriend hated her and was only dating her cause he wanted a girlfriend and he wanted this girl for her beauty and that was all.

And now with only 5 minutes of living left, it seemed hopeless. Footsteps could be heard somewhere around the general area this girl was but the girl payed it no heed. It seemed hopeless for her now and she had given up hope.

And what happens next depends on you. You are the person maknig those footsteps. You will eventually walk by the alley the girl is laying in, will you look into the alley and see her? Or will you wlak on by as if she's not there?

There is alot of people who aren't physicly injured but they are emmotionally injured like this. So watch what you say to someone cause you could really be hurting them more then what they were before. The girl is based off of someone but I'll let you all figure out who that someone is cause all these facts are true about this girls emmotional hurts.
©2007-2009 ~kooky112
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yeeaah couldnt think of a better title for this.

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:iconsupersysscvi:
Wow... very interesting... interesting. Yeah. And thoughtful. ...

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You rock. I suck. Enough said.
:iconkooky112:
...most of it I didn't even need thought to

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~MidnaFans
:iconsupersysscvi:
Well, I can see that it came to you without you even needing to think hard on it... but I just can't help that you didn't finish your sentence for a reason. Was it for drama's sake, or is that how you were expressing your idea?

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You rock. I suck. Enough said.
:iconkooky112:
it's for drama kind of

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:iconholyking160:
>_> i don't have to guess who this girl is sis the dating thing gave it away right off the bat. none the less sis you still do have friends that love you and care about you. you know this

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:iconkooky112:
true oh sotrue but I'm still hurting from family and friends. And even nicta has hurt me.

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~MidnaFans
:iconsupersysscvi:
Ah, I see, I see.

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You rock. I suck. Enough said.
:iconlordofpastries:
besides the spelling mistakes this story is beautiful! It touched me and reminds me of a fanfic I SHOOULD start (ah the blessed procrastination

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Kooky...I phope you know I care for you and I am not a pedophile :XD: okay??? okay??? go cheer up. Listen to Wierd Al or watch LegendaryFrog animations. ><

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Luke ♥ Flora || Phoenix ♥ Maya
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